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翻江鼠 发表于 2008-3-7 09:19

<IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200836214617234.jpg" width=705 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0><IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200836214840563.jpg" width=705 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0> <SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">童年的欢笑，青春的奋发，离别的悲伤，思念的悠长<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">… <SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">真正的速度是看不见的<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">就象风起云涌，日落月升，<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"> <SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">不知道树叶什么时候变黄<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">婴儿什么时候长第一颗牙齿，<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"> <SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">不知道什么时候会爱上一个人<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">什么时候会离开一个熟悉的地方<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">…   <SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">无数的恩怨始于海棠花下<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">无数的恩怨止于海棠花下<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">…

翻江鼠 发表于 2008-3-7 09:16

<IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200836214343927.jpg" width=705 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0> <SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">来南方已经两年了，还记得走前爸爸不无伤感地对妈妈说<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">:<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">孩子终归要离开我们了<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">终归厌倦北方的寒冷与静默<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">往南方去了<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">…<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">毕业后<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">哥哥就带她来到了南方的城市<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">..<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">临走前<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">爸爸给了他们每人一盆海棠花<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">,<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">爸爸说<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">:<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">海棠花是最有北方性格的花，顽强而不失妩媚，亲切而懂得自尊自爱<SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">…

翻江鼠 发表于 2008-3-7 09:00

<IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200836201121399.jpg" width=688 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0>   海棠诗鉴赏<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>  　薛宝钗诗<o:p></o:p> 　　珍重芳姿昼掩门，自携手瓮灌苔盆。<o:p></o:p>　　姻脂洗出秋阶影，冰雪招来露砌魂。<o:p></o:p>　　淡极始知花更艳，愁多焉得玉无痕。<o:p></o:p>　　欲偿白帝凭清洁，不语婷婷日又昏。<o:p></o:p> 　　【诗词鉴赏】<o:p></o:p>　　海棠诗社由李纨自荐掌坛，并声明：“若是要推我作社长，我一个社长自然不够，必要再请两位副社长，就请菱洲(迎春别号)、藕树(惜春别号)二位学究来，一位出题限韵，一位誊录监场。亦不可拘定了我们三个人不作，若遇见容易些的题目韵脚，我们也随便作一首。你们四个都是要限定的。”李纨说的“四个”，即探春、宝钗、宝玉、黛玉，所以第一次作海棠诗的只有他们四位。<o:p></o:p>　　宝钗是封建阶级典型的大家闺秀，几乎到了“非礼勿视，非礼勿听，非礼勿言，非礼勿动”的地步。虽然小时也偷读过《西厢记》一类的书，但在人前绝不流露；听到黛玉行酒令时说出《西厢记》中的词语，立即在背后提出善意的告诫；大观园出了“绣春囊”事件，她立即借口母亲有病搬出大观园等等，都是她“珍重芳姿”的表现。她平日不爱花儿粉儿的，穿着的也是半新不1日的衣服，这是她“洗出”“胭脂”的注脚。“淡极始知花更艳”，表明她对自己内在和外在的美都充满了矜持和自信，第五回里说她“品格端方，容貌丰美，人多谓黛玉所不及”，即是旁证。<o:p></o:p>　　“愁多焉得玉无痕”一句，直接指的是白海棠，有一条脂批说：“讽刺林、宝二人。”林、宝二人的名字都有“玉”字，他们确也“多愁”，这究竞是有意地影射呢，还是偶然的巧合?不好下断语，可聊备一说。<o:p></o:p>诗社社长李纨以为“要推宝钗这诗有身分”，这身分就是封建社会“淑女”的身分。宝钗既受了封建礼教深深的毒害，又用这种礼教去约束别人，并且自以为是在帮助人。她的悲剧就在于害已害人都不自觉。从本质上说，她不是恶人，更不是阴谋家，她的未来的遭遇也是值得同情的。<o:p></o:p>

翻江鼠 发表于 2008-3-7 09:43

翻江鼠 发表于 2008-3-7 09:03

<IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200836213132317.jpg" width=705 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0> 海棠诗鉴赏<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p> 　　林黛玉诗<o:p></o:p> 　　半卷湘帘半掩门，碾冰为土玉为盆。<o:p></o:p> 　　偷来梨蕊三分白，借得梅花一缕魂。<o:p></o:p> 　　月窟仙人缝缟抉，秋闺怨女拭啼痕。<o:p></o:p> 　　娇羞默默同谁诉，倦倚西风夜已昏。<o:p></o:p> 　　【诗词鉴赏】<o:p></o:p> 　　别人都交卷了，黛玉还没作。李纨催她，她提笔一挥而就，掷给李纨等人，表现了黛玉才思特殊的敏捷。<o:p></o:p>　　和宝钗“珍重芳姿昼掩门”相反，黛玉是“半卷湘帘半掩门”，任性任情，并不特别珍视贵族小姐的身分。“碾冰为土玉为盆”，表明她玉洁冰清，目下无尘。她以白海棠自比，有梨花的洁白，有梅花的馨香。“月窟仙人”不就是“绛珠仙子”吗?在清冷的月窟里缝白色的缟衣，多么颓丧；在秋天的深闺里悄悄哭泣，又多么可怜。满腹的心事不能向任何人倾诉，只好在西风落叶的季节，凄凄凉凉地送走一个又一个寂寞的黄昏。<o:p></o:p>诗社众人看了黛玉的诗，“都道是这首为上”，李纨却说：“若论风流别致，自是这首；若论含蓄浑厚，终让蘅(宝钗)稿。”李纨的评价未必公允，但她的评论确也指出了林、薛二人诗的特点。所谓“风流别致”，就是构思新巧，潇洒通脱，所谓“含蓄浑厚”，就是温柔敦厚，哀而不伤。李纨从“大家闺秀”的标准来衡量，自然要把四平八稳的宝钗的诗评为第一了。只有最理解黛玉的宝玉理解了她的诗的内蕴，要求重新评价薛、林诗的高下，被李纨顶了回去。<o:p></o:p>

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