[原创]鹧鸪天——华夏遍地是英雄。
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></SPAN></B> </P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">戏水岂止夏秋冬，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">春回大地照样行。</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">挥臂拨开千层浪，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">疑是江河腾蛟龙。</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">战严寒，斗洪峰，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">冬泳健儿齐奋勇。</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">五环旗下歌一曲，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">华夏遍地是英雄。</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 143pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-char-indent-count: 6.5; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align=left><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">2008</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">年</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">2</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">月</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">8</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">日</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P> 好词！古体诗词较难作，鹧鸪天的词牌很象两首七绝相并而成，只是后阕换头处稍变。三平韵，一韵到底。上阕第三四句、下阕第一二句一般要求对仗，工整！意境也好，写出了冬泳人的气概。加精了。 有才！ <FONT color=#dd226d size=6>鼠哥又一精品!</FONT> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">戏水岂止夏秋冬，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">春回大地照样行。</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">挥臂拨开千层浪，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">疑是江河腾蛟龙。</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">战严寒，斗洪峰，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">冬泳健儿齐奋勇。</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">五环旗下歌一曲，</SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">华夏遍地是英雄。</SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></SPAN></B> </P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><FONT color=#e61a6b size=5>鼠哥的词填写得有功夫，尤其这一句“五环旗下歌一曲，华夏遍地是英雄。”很鼓劲。</FONT></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 33.15pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></SPAN></B><B style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B> </P> <BR><IMG src="/attachments/Upfiles/200821091921634.gif"><BR><BR> 引用<FONT size=5> <br><HR><FONT size=3>原文由 <STRONG>候哥</STRONG> 发表：</FONT>好词！古体诗词较难作，鹧鸪天的词牌很象两首七绝相并而成，只是后阕换头处稍变。三平韵，一韵到底。上阕第三四句、下阕第一二句一般要求对仗，工整！意境也好，写出了冬泳人的气概。加精了。<BR><HR><BR></FONT> <FONT size=7>有气派<IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200821063919289.gif" onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0></FONT> 很受鼓舞 <SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial"><FONT color=#e61a6b size=5><STRONG> 鼠哥的词填写得有功夫，侯哥的点评也真有学问。学习了。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN> <BR><IMG src="/attachments/Upfiles/2008210182149339.jpg"><BR><BR> 原文由 一石击水 发表: <FONT color=#dd226d size=6>鼠哥又一精品!</FONT> 原文由 心地善良的鱼 发表: <BR><IMG src="/attachments/Upfiles/200821091921634.gif"><BR><BR> <IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/2008210193753600.jpg" onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0> <P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>戏水岂止夏秋冬，</FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>春回大地照样行。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>挥臂拨开千层浪，</FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>疑是江河腾蛟龙。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7> </FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>战严寒，斗洪峰，</FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>冬泳健儿齐奋勇。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>五环旗下歌一曲，</FONT></P><P><FONT face=华文彩云 color=#3300ff size=7>华夏遍地是英雄。<BR></FONT></P> <FONT size=6>谢谢楼主</FONT> 引用<FONT size=5><HR><FONT size=3>原文由 <STRONG>候哥</STRONG> 发表：</FONT>好词！古体诗词较难作，鹧鸪天的词牌很象两首七绝相并而成，只是后阕换头处稍变。三平韵，一韵到底。上阕第三四句、下阕第一二句一般要求对仗，工整！意境也好，写出了冬泳人的气概。加精了。<br><HR><br>谢谢！候哥学问深，向你学习，我也是闲暇无事学学填词罢了。<BR></FONT>
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