红泥心虫 发表于 2007-9-5 22:09

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泳者逍遥 发表于 2007-9-6 00:19

诗的最后两句应修该一下。

冰团战友 发表于 2007-9-6 08:35

<P><FONT face=幼圆 color=#d52bb3 size=5>网上少见这样工整的诗篇。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=幼圆 color=#d52bb3 size=5>承载的是一颗历久弥坚的心。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=幼圆 color=#d52bb3 size=5>祝楼主健康快乐！</FONT></P>

侯哥 发表于 2007-9-6 09:32

好诗，我收藏了<br>是我孤陋寡闻，大凡写秋的诗，不伤感的不多，能有淡然似水的心态，是冬泳练就的<br>

杨万滨 发表于 2007-9-6 09:37

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紫衣の罗兰 发表于 2007-9-6 10:22

原文由 冰团战友 发表: <br><P><FONT face=幼圆 color=#d52bb3 size=5>网上少见这样工整的诗篇。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=幼圆 color=#d52bb3 size=5>承载的是一颗历久弥坚的心。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=幼圆 color=#d52bb3 size=5>祝楼主健康快乐！</FONT></P><P></P><P>&nbsp;</P><P><FONT size=7>欣赏！</FONT></P>

翻江鼠 发表于 2007-9-6 11:50

<P><FONT size=6>好诗</FONT></P><P><BR><IMG src="/attachments/Upfiles/200796114946783.jpg"><BR><BR></P>

铁锚 发表于 2015-4-7 17:32

:):lol
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