红泥心虫 发表于 2007-8-31 09:57

秋日有感

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启明 发表于 2007-8-31 12:10

白露时分旷野幽<br><br>数声阵雁返南洲<br><br>天街似水风拂柳<br><br>海浪如鳞鱼戏舟<br><br>

侯哥 发表于 2007-9-1 06:22

"长天"可否改为“长空”<br>前面写秋天的景致，后面叙情，多少有些凄凉

红泥心虫 发表于 2007-9-1 22:28

<FONT size=5>好!</FONT>

熊掌 发表于 2007-9-2 07:47

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